I was proud about this piece because I did this in a span of two days, I honestly was going to give up until I thought about graduation, and how much I wanted to be apart of that. Also that I came this far to just stop trying now. I knew that I had all the information I needed although I had changed my topic three times. I think that I did a good job of keeping the reader reading. I think that my writing is good in terms of engaging the reader.
College Essay
I choose my college essay because I worked really hard on it. I thought that it was by far some of my best work in terms of a keeping something brief and to the point. I found this hard because before I had 754 words and I had to cut off about over 100 words to get it to the 650 word limit. I thought this was hard for me because I'm very specific, technical person and I like to explain myself a lot and give you as much details about me as possible. However with this essay it was different because in school you have to elaborate on what you want to say but in this one you had to try to keep everything vague but enough the get to the point.
Lead up paper two
I picked this because I got a very different grade than the first time. I noticed what I did wrong so I asked for help. I ended up doing way better and noticing the mistakes that I've been doing all year.